My next step in poems is to learn about alliteration.
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This is my assonance poem.
I was using assonance to put in my poem.
I thought putting the assonance in was kinda hard.
Assonance means in poetry,the repetition of the sound of a vowel.
Now I know how to put assonance in my poems.
I love this poem Kaya. Well done on your success. You are also using the Smart Learner Framework well. Great to see! Just some editing needed on Now I (capital) know how..
ReplyDeleteHey Kaya, my name is Amelia and I'm from Gilberthorpe School.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely poem. So inspirational, maybe even I will do one because it is so clever.
Did you come up with it or did your teacher come up with it?
Really love this poem so much, and how could I forget to mention it rhymes!
Why did you mention your uncle? It was super funny!
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DeleteHey Kaya, my name is Jorja and I'm from Gilberthorpe School.
ReplyDeleteYou are so creative with the rhymes and how you said what you like and don't like.
What is your favorite part.
Hi Jorja,My favorite part is I like cats but I dont like their claws I like puppies because of their cute paws.
DeleteHi my name is Karen I love your poem it's lovely and I love animals.
ReplyDeleteThankyou
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