Practice makes perfect!Practicing my speech.How does it sound?

This is my speech I think I was successful because I changed the tone of my voice and used expressions. When we have the contest I will improve by speaking loudly and clearly.  

Te reo maori

This is my te reo maori I though it was hard because finding the right maori words and saying them were hard too.

Related to the mud monsters.

This is what I was learning this week:WALT independently improve our work by adding interesting language to enhance the mood we are trying to create

I think I was successful because I have loads of interesting language such as humour, hyperbole,adjectives,repetition

I still need to learn to remember to use full stops instead of commas.

Splash!Splash! Mud and water went up my face.It dropped to the ground Splat!. maybe we should go back to when we arrived.Let’s go to the beginning.

It was a long long long time ago actually it was just 5 minutes ago. We had arrived at Okaihau for my cousin’s rugby game and straight away.Crazy me jumped out with excitement and ran to the muddy puddles and jumped in them as much as I can.Splash! Splash!

Then I made the biggest mistake of my life It was…….Splashing my mum.I fell with laughter the look on her face was to die for. It was hilarious but on the other hand my mum was having a temper. Her face was bright red.I knew by the look on her face that I was walking home. My dad came over to see what happend. My little annoying brother followed  like a little duck following his mum except he followed my dad.Splash! Splash!"Opps!" I quivered (I did not know dad was right behind me). “Bye” I said while I was running away,  I ask my nana and papa if they could take me home.

Five thousand years later my cousin and his team lost their rugby game.Here I am, saying “ Is this all we spent five thousand years for them to lose really well i’m out of here” then I could feel something behind I didn’t know what it was but it was a huge big fat...Ohh It was just my cousin covered in the most mud I could ever see a person covered,It was like he was a magnet but a mud one and every little piece of mud was on him.I couldn’t stop laughing he was the mud monster.I heard about him but I didn’t know he was real even if he was real I can’t believe that he was my cousin.

All night I couldn’t stop laughing because he had to take at least more than twenty showers,the water would of been cold by now or at least getting cold.I will never forget about that time that my cousin was the mud monster NEVER NEVER NEVER.

Keep your cat inside

This is my vocabulary task keep your at inside.