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Monday 14 March 2016

Three Bad Things

This is my draft two. What I want to get better at is adding more detail and using interesting words and phrases.

Three Bad Things

I would regret telling you this but I will anyway.It all started when mum and dad said lets go to Whangarie. Well three bad things happen to me that day...

 When we were in the car I got car sick.Then we stopped at the park and something came out It was vomit I spewed all over my mum at the park . She said “ yuck what did you eat Kaya” My dad laughed. That was the first bad thing. After that we went to my nan’s house and my cousin’s were there and we had a bike race.

 I crashed into a tree that was the second bad thing and I got my cousin’s attention and she crashed into me that was the third bad thing . I will never forget that most disgusting time when I spewed all over my mum.