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Thursday 30 June 2016

Hey do you want to know what I am learning for writing well read here>.


I am learning to add figurative language to my work and synonyms for said

                        :CAUTION GROSS READ AT YOUR OWN RISK:
Do you want to know how I got a bloody knee? Well, this is how started.
On a cold freezing Saturday morning there I was standing  with Rangimarie, her mum,her dad, Huhanna, my mum,  Kullen and some people from the team. We were at Kaikohe Netball court getting ready for our netball game. I  whispered “Where are they?” “Umm I don't know” Rangimarie replied.

A few minutes into our warm up Aunty Mere told us who we were against. She happily sang out “We’re vs East we’re vs East”. We all shouted “ yeah!” It was a  funny moment. A while later, there we were out on the netball court with Kaikohe East I was playing wing defence.

Nearly half way through the game Boom  I fell to the ground on my knee it was this big--------. Ouchy!  . It was bleeding. My graze stung like a bee-sting. Lucky it wasn't night and vampires aren't real i thought to myself. I was scared.  I was almost about to cry but, I didn't. I keep going and never gave up. Later it was half time Aunty Mere nicely asked me “are you ok?” I replied “yeah, just fine. Thats what happens when you play sports aye?”

A few steals later it was the second half. I was on the court with my cousin Alexis she was wing attack and I was wing defence. The whistle blew wewewe! I ran to defence so that East couldn’t get the ball .Out came the big girl blocking me, I couldn’t get through. It was hot the sun was punching me down.Drip drop drip drop do you know what that was???(It was my sweat slipping down my body as I played). I was breathless trying to steal the ball of them I mean totally puffing.  I was like a steam train. A couple of missed shoots later and the game was over. East School didn’t have much to say. I asked “cat got your tongue?” They nodded their heads.

We were all sad but happy that we had participated.I will always remember that feeling when we lost to a good team.

Thursday 23 June 2016

Do you like peanuts? Well read this.

Last Week I read The Peanut Prankster it is a fiction.
This story is Written by Karen Wallace and Judy Brown.


This book was mostly about a man who tricked the queen into giving him the royal jewels for dum purple peanuts but the crook catchers (the crook catchers are Lettuce
leef and Nimble Charlie). They  stopped this man by using his brother.


This is how they did it .When the queen was about to give him the royal gems that’s when his brother ran into the room and the queen got confused she yelled” step forward the real El Bulgey Blabalotti” they both stepped forward then the queen's royal assent slappter ran in the middle of them and put a hand  on each of their heads and rubbed then their head. There wigs fell off. The queen went red and yelled “guards” and thats is how they stopped him.    


My favorite part was when twenty royal corgis thundered into the room and that meant the queen was coming in.

What have you been reading?