Scream!

This is my recount writing.I have been learning to try and use figurative language such as simile, hyperbole, pun or metaphor in my story.

Scream!

“Rainbow Falls! Rainbow Falls!” was all I could hear.

Excitedly I screamed as we pulled into Rainbow falls drive thru I was so excited super duper excited. First I got our food and ran straight down to the picnic table.Then my mum,nana,dad,brother,uncle and cousin came down too.

When we got down I put my togs on and jumped right into the water. I started doing bombs until….Something had a hold of me, pulling me down .Help!. I was almost drowning so I tried kicking it but I kept on missing so I screamed as loud as I could but every time I would scream it would pull me straight down.It was a horror scene. I was a cat scared to have a bath ( thats why cats dont like baths because they can drown)

Finally it let me go it was a big huge giant wait it was just my cousin 2 years older than me.She started laughing at me so I said “you just wait I will get you back”.I told her “You just keep on laughing you can have this moment for now”

Five minute later we had a big picnic with chocolate, skittles,chicken but then I put loads of pepper and salt on her chicken and her face looked so funny when she ate her chicken. I said “Who’s laughing now”After that we went to the other side of paihia to pick some juicy pipis(When we were picking pipis I was eating them too)

.Finally we went home.I will never forget that day when I finally got my cousin back for pranking me.

My next steps are to put more interesting words in my story.