Do you agree with me?

This is my persuasive Writing about~Should kids have a phone?~

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I potently believe that young people shouldn’t be able to have a mobile phone,When it comes to owning a
phone parents are concerned that their kids might be getting bullied,catfished but most definitely they are
getting distracted.

Firstly I think that kids shouldn’t have phones because of bullying.Kids go onto social media sites such
as Instagram,Snapchat,Messenger,Twitter and Facebook nearly everyday,Kids use these sites to
communicate with friends and family.But not everyone are friends.Kids between the ages of 12-16
are getting messages like ‘your ugly’, ‘ew look at your face’ and many more nasty messages.These
messages are making kids feel insecure about themselves and making them feel bad

Secondly there are nasty people catfishing your kids and you need to trust them.

How do you know the person your kids are talking to are actually who they say they are?

You don’t and thats whats bad about it.You never know who your children could be talking to.
They could be an 50 year old lady for all we know.Pretending to be someone that goes to there school.

Thirdly it’s distracting kids from reality.Fresh air is good for kids and they need it.But phones are
distracting them from fresh air,family and chores.When your working late at work and the house is
a mess you would expect that your kids would clean up,but most of the time their on their phones and
theres dishes all over the counter and there is a huge mess to clean when you get home.

In conclusion I think that if you are giving your kids a phone to set rules and how long they should be on
there phone,or else your going to be really exhausted.Take it from my mother don’t make the mistake
she did by giving my little siblings phones so they could watch YOUTUBE.