Practice makes perfect!Practicing my speech.How does it sound?
This is my speech I think I was successful because I changed the tone of my voice and used expressions.
When we have the contest I will improve by speaking loudly and clearly.
Hi there, my name is Saskia and I am a student in room 9 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the fact that you had a lot of reasons for homework being good . It made me think of how different a future we will all have if we do our homework. But have you thought about all the people that did their homework but still didn’t do well in school?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://saskiac2017@waikowhai.school.nz. blogspot.co.nz.
Kiora kaya I really like the fact you had a lots of reasons for homework by the way it made me think how different it would be in the future when we all have to do homework. blog you later.
Hi Kaya, my name is Abby from Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you thought about how you can make homework fun. You could try and make the writing fit around your video. Otherwise it makes me think about how I can make my homework fun! Do you like homework? If you would like to look at my learning log it is http://wpsabbym.blogspot.co.nz/ -Abby
Hi Kaya my name is Lucy I go Papakura Central School I thought that it was a really good idea to make homework fun Maybe next time you could do the video inside so we don`t hear all the wind noises in the background
If you would like to see my learning copy this link http://pcslucyk.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi there, my name is Saskia and I am a student in room 9 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the fact that you had a lot of reasons for homework being good . It made me think of how different a future we will all have if we do our homework. But have you thought about all the people that did their homework but still didn’t do well in school?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://saskiac2017@waikowhai.school.nz. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThanks Saskia
DeleteKiora kaya I really like the fact you had a lots of reasons for homework by the way it made me think how different it would be in the future when we all have to do homework. blog you later.
ReplyDeleteThanks Myer
DeleteHi Kaya, my name is Abby from Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you thought about how you can make homework fun. You could try and make the writing fit around your video. Otherwise it makes me think about how I can make my homework fun! Do you like homework?
If you would like to look at my learning log it is http://wpsabbym.blogspot.co.nz/
-Abby
Hi Abby yes I like homework i'll check your blog later.
DeleteHi Kaya my name is Lucy I go Papakura Central School
ReplyDeleteI thought that it was a really good idea to make homework fun Maybe next time you could do the video inside so we don`t hear all the wind noises in the background
If you would like to see my learning copy this link
http://pcslucyk.blogspot.co.nz/
Keep it up
Thanks for your feedback Lucy
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