Hi Kaya, Well done on your second persuasive writing. Can you make it larger so it is easy to read. Also you can correct plane (flying in the sky) to plain (boring). I expected to see rotation and strategy DLO. Why are they not posted?
Hi Kaya,my name is Carmel and I go to Waima School. I really like the colours in your blog post and I really think you may become a real author someday and say this kinda reminds me of fire works suggested by the colours.
Hi Kaya,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your second persuasive writing. Can you make it larger so it is easy to read. Also you can correct plane (flying in the sky) to plain (boring). I expected to see rotation and strategy DLO. Why are they not posted?
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ReplyDeleteHi Kaya,my name is Carmel and I go to Waima School. I really like the colours in your blog post and I really think you may become a real author someday and say this kinda reminds me of fire works suggested by the colours.
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