BOK CHOY
In the last weeks I have been reading this cool book called Bok Choy. It was written by Paul Mason and this story is a fiction.
This setting is in Otago and it was written in 1865, the main characters are Jacob and a man named Ah sum. Jacob got rescued by someone who everybody hates (Ah sum).
The scariest thing was when Jacob fell into a river and got pushed up against the rocks but Ah sum saved him. And at the end Mrs bishop said the Chinese man would probably sell his own mother for a penny. Isn’t that mean? so thats the end of this book.
What have you been reading?
Hi Kaya, I'm Freya from Paihia School, I'm 9 yrs old. That book looks really interesting. Next time add full stops and capitals. I really want to read that book. I have been reading a book called Eldest.
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Thanks Fred, I see I have missed two full stops. I will go put them in right now. Thank you!
DeleteHi there I am Katipa from Paihia school Wow! Reading a book in the last weeks you must really like that book but next time on another book can you do a story line please because I know you did the setting and what the scary part was but how will we know what happened in the first part of the story.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Dallas and I really like that book because its a good book for all of the children you need to get your hand out of the picture you need a string hold on the book that's how people do.
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Hi Kaya, Thank you for reading Bok Choy and writing a review. Yes, you're right, Mrs Bishop is a mean character. But Jacob's mother is open-minded and kind. I wrote the story to encourage people to be more like her. Thanks again, and keep on reading! Kind Regards, Paul Mason
ReplyDeleteThank you for your really nice comment.
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