I have tried to independently improve on my sentences.I’m learning to write a variety of sentence types for effect.
-Simple,compound,complex
-Commas for phrases
-Commas for additional information
-Short punchy for impact.
Instagram Fizique.
Not everyone thinks sports is as outstanding as I think it is plus sports is better than music.Do you agree with me? If you don’t here are three tremendous reason why I think it is.
One reason why I think sports is more important than music because sports gets you fit and healthy.How appalling is it to know that people, especially kids, get sick rom diabetes and other tragic medical health issues.How outrages is that.Sports is a great way to get fit and healthy and lose some weight.How does playing sports gets you fit and healthy?Well it’s simple all of that running around moves your muscles giving your the adrenaline to win.
Another reason why I think sports is far more important than music because you make friends.For example when the all blacks and the wallabies play it looks like they hate each other but they don’t their just playing rugby.Have you ever played sports and made friends with the other team? Well this my friend is what I call uniting nations.Uniting nations is when you make friends with the other team you can friends from all over the world.How magnificent is that? You won’t be a loner.
My last reason is because sports makes you brave.Do you know that feeling when you get loads of butterflies? Well you’re going to learn that when you play sports butterflies don’t matter. But if they do your not going to win.But when you keep playing games, such as touch and netball, over and over you basically get over the fact that you’re scared and those big people who look so scary actually aren’t so scary anymore.
In summary I think sports is more important than music and I hope you agree with me.Sports is life changing not music.Sports gives you a great Instagram fizique
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