This is what I did with whaea lana hope you enjoy

Workshop with Chris in workshop we learnt how to find the author of any photos that I used and we used creative commons website.

 

This is my writing assessment I have worked on improving its punctuation,spelling and volcabulary

On a friday afternoon my mum and dad came to pick us up to go to Whangarei  when we were going to Whangarei we  were playing I spy. It was fun.

Then we got to Whangarei.

In Whangarei we went to my aunty and uncle's house. And they were not there so we called them to see how long they were going to be after a while they came. My uncle asked if we wanted to go on the boat tomorrow.

My mum said “ok”. On Sunday we went to matapouri it was fun in matapouri we went to the beach at the beach my baby cousin made a sandcastle   but me and my other cousins all had a race in when we jumped in  the water felt as cold as ice.  

After that my uncle asked if we were ready we said “yes” so he took us for a ride it was fun. We could see all of the fish and turtles  and they were as colorful as rainbows “that was epic” I said. Later on we had lunch for lunch we had McDonald I had a waffle cone and the chocolate was slipping down my mouth like a worm after that we had to wait a while I was waiting I had a sand castle building challenge I was awesome. After that we were allowed back in the water so I jumped in and swam to my uncle's boat because he parked it in the water.  I climbed up the ladder and jumped into the water then I did freestyle.

After that  we picked up  K.F.C and went to the park.  The park as fun as rainbows end.

Then It started getting late so we went to my uncle's house and watched tv a little while later my cousins cousins came over and we played spotlight I was hiding by the tree I was laughing because they thought I was in the tree and then they  finally found us so it was my turn to seek  when I  was running to find  my cousin. My eyes where owl eyes looking for him then my cousin jumped out of the parked boat with the other cousins and I got them then they went home  so we had ribs the ribs were as sweet as chocolate then we watched a movie  and went home.

I will never forget when I got a ride in my uncle's boat. The fish and turtles were beautiful.

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Today in class we revisited the kawa of care

My wonderings

My Recount

Tuesday 27th October In Paihia On a sunny Sunday my family and I were going to Paihia. So we all got up but first we got dressed and then we all ran outside and played cricket.The teams were Tane, Me and my little cousin Tamina. In the other team was my cousin Mana, Jahnel and my cousin Adam. We played the song Hula Hoop by Omi and Sorry by Justin Bieber. In the video there were girls dancing. I knew some of them. Samaya, and Paris Goebel. After that my mum told us to go to the van. Before we went to the van we all got some equipment like the basketball and the rugby ball. Then we went to Paihia and my mum came with our towels and clothes. My dad came with us too and Parry. She's my cousin. When we got to Paihia we all jumped out of the van and ran down to the sand because my mum and dad told us to build a big castle. That was fun. I made a big one with a sand wall and a sticky wall and another wall made out of rocks. Then there was seaweed. I put seaweed all over my castle and my cousins made some with stuff all over it but then I ran to the park. I played on the flying fox but I accidently pushed my cousin Jahnel off the flying fox. A little while later we went home and then we watched the movie on the laptop. We connected it to the tv with the HDMI cord. The movie we watched was a funny movie. It was called 22 Jump Street.

My book review

This week I was reading The Menagerie Dragon on Trial It is a fiction the Author is Tui t Sutherland and its about a dragon and this dragon lives in a cave and on the mountain and there is this castle and this king sent some guards to kill the dragon but they are scared of the dragon.

My favorite part was when the princess followed the guards to the dragon's cave when they got there the princess was hiding behind a tree and the guards left her behind. So the princess ran in the cave and started to train and feed the dragon. . What have you been reading?