WALT improve our writing by carefully checking our sentences and trying to add descriptive language.By highlighting them yellow.
I think I am very good at adding descriptive language in my writing.My next steps are to add punctuation in my dialogue.
PAYBACKS.
“We’re going to the beach we’re going to the beach”Kullen chanted with heaps and heaps of excitement. It was like Christmas morning and he was so so excited to open his presents.
We all put our togs on and jumped right into the water. Then... I Scared my cousins. I had a hold of them but my cousin Paula and Jahnel got away.I was pulling Tia down. She was freaking out so she tried kicking me but kept missing so she screamed as loud as she could but every time she would scream I would pull her straight down.She was a victim of a horror movie.She was as scared as a cat having a bath.
Finally I let her go, I started laughing at her so she said “You just wait I will get you back”.She told me “You just keep on laughing you can have this moment for now” My heart was pounding as fast as a wild horse.
Five minute later we had a big picnic with chocolate, skittles,chicken,chips,crackers and drinks.I have never ever tasted more delicious food than that. Then Tia sprinkled sand all over my chicken she said “Who’s laughing now” I was soo angry, I was about to explode.My mouth tasted disgusting. After that we had a sand ball fight.It was amazing.Finally we went home.I will never forget that day when my cousin got me back for pranking her.That was the best day of my life except for when Tia got me back.
